This group does not seem to be very active, and I was wondering if anyone was working on a book, essays, articles, and so forth.  Does anyone need a pre-publishing critique?  

I finished my first book recently (see http://www.goinggodless.com) before I had joined the site, and one of the struggles I had was getting honest feedback on my writing.  I would be glad to help out anyone who would like a second set of eyes on what they are doing.


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I'm working on my atheist/comedy/parenting blog  http://www.laughinginpurgatory.com/

I'm also polishing up some movie scripts - mostly horror/comedy material.

I'm considering working on a humor book that looks at parenting (not stuff I've covered in the blog).

Currently working on this:

Fat Camping(Working title: About a group of overweight/Fat Acceptan...

  And this:

The Field Trip(About a group of atheists infiltrating a macabre chu...

And this:

The Atheist and The Priest[About an atheist who falls for a Priest(...

 

I work on longer things, that I sit on for a while, in google docs, but I also write in a notebook/journal set, and then post them to my deviantart when I approve of them.

My publisher is antsy for the sequel to "She Made Me Do It: Stories about Dominant Women and Their Playthings." Most of the stories are done and a few are in the works. Should have it all out to him by the end of the month. Revelation: sex is exhausting, and I'm just writing about it!

I'm working on a huuuuge novel (at least it will be until I stop writing and start editing) and have a scene that I think works but the visual is so stuck in my mind that I don't know if the description will convey the Halloween costume selected by one of the teenagers. Please read this section and let me know what you think he has chosen to wear:

 

     He had found several cardboard boxes, used a knife and tape to make a crucifix shape six feet tall, and cut out holes for his head and hands. The bottom of the curious device was left open for his feet, and the front face was painted with a crude replica of Jesus. Even Duncan was horrified at the tastelessness of Habib’s costume.

     “You can’t wear that to the party.”

     “Why not? It took hours to make. C’mon, help me get it over my head so you can see the full effect.”

     “No way. It’ll offend too many of the girls at the party. Those Christian Union ones will really get their knickers in a twist over this.”

    “How many is too many? If I only offend less than fifty percent of the people at the party, would that be acceptable? How about twenty percent?”

     “Nope. You wear it, and I’m not going to be there.” Duncan put his hands on his hips in what he imagined was a defiant pose. Habib put his hands on his hips and smiled back like a mirror until Duncan relented. “Well, let’s at least get a photo of you wearing the damned thing.” He picked up the cross-tower of boxes and directed it over Habib’s head. “Wow, that looks hilarious.”

     “So, I can wear it and you’ll come with me?”

     “No. But I will get a picture. Where’s your Kodak?”

     Habib vaguely motioned to a shelf with a hand constrained by cardboard around his wrist. “You’ll have to put a new 126 cartridge in it. [and so on]


 

This is decent, but I would like a better description of the costume possibly? Go crazy with adjectives I say. Funny idea.
I'm working on creating a publication that I need help with. I am very amateur at writing, but I'm slowly getting better at expressing my ideas. Please begin an e-mail dialog with me so I can share a section I'm working on. my e-mail is atypican@freepressbible.net

I'm working on something that sort of amounts to a manifesto for rationalism which I've titled Faith is a Crime.  The basic approach is to counter irrational thinking on an inherent level showing that the ideas and bases thereof fall to pieces even when taken on their own terms.  It not only aims its rifle at religion, but faith itself in all its various expressions.

Being that it is the sort of goal which fragments in many directions (since faith itself is a pretty generic thing), I'm trying to do a lot to keep it organized and coherent, so I'd certainly like to bounce it off other people and see what they think.

Hey, I've written a poem. I'll be glad to read other stuff from some peeps. Let me know what you dudes and ladies think...

 

“DeSi-gN”

 

Order of worlds under sublime command

Cosmic origins asserted by faith

He sculpts all things with omnipotent hand

But why choose infected mud as the clay –

 

For molding craters cancer and fate?

If He authored the half-life of water

And spun the spiral towards death and decay

Set the tinder for fires and disaster

 

And chaos reigns – then the dawn of matter

Is an illusion of seamless design

Yet from flawed origins grew sublime power

Skill to shape verse and desire to contrive

 

The order of words more keen and divine

Molded with finite pen and fallible mind

I'm new here on the Nexus, and glad I found this specific group.

I'm working on novel called "The Holy Family," about a contemporary family and its turn to atheism. It is presently being read by a couple of trusted former colleagues, and once I have their feedback I'll figure out my next steps. It's possible I will publish it under my own nascent imprint--I'm an unemployed publishing professional and have an editorial services company under which I could publish it in both print and electronic formats. Having worked inside several traditional publishers I know all too well how difficult it is to get their attention (and marketing dollars!), as well as how much good stuff gets left by the wayside for various reasons.

But it's a new world out there, and I may as well try to make some hay with it.

I've also just started a new blog, called "AMW's World of Fame, Shame, and Getting in the Game," where I intend to build my "brand" at www.alanmichaelwilt.com.

Not to be too self-serving, but I am available to critique and edit manuscripts--however, there's no way I can offer such services for free, but I am always able to negotiate! You can learn more about that at www.tuckerseven.com.

Thanks!

AMW

Does anybody want a copy of my new book, The Little Book of Unholy Questions for review (on Amazon)? If so, message me and I'll send an electronic copy. A review can be found here: http://www.amazon.com/Little-Book-Unholy-Questions/product-reviews/...

 

Cheers

 

Jonathan Pearce

I feel guilty for not being more involved (okay involved at all) with Atheist Nexus. To answer this thread's original question. Yes, I work on writing all the time. My science fiction story "The Old Equations" from last year was nominated for the SFWA Nebula Award and is currently nominated for the Theodore Sturgeon Memorial Award. I have a story coming out next month in Lightspeed Magazine, a story coming out in August in Fireside Magazine, and early next year a humor story of mine will be released in the UFO: Unidentified Funny Objects anthology.

I'm currently working on a novel.

I'll try to be more involved in this forum moving forward. Hope everyone is doing well!

Jake

I am working on a book tentatively entitled "Why I Don't Believe in God...and Why You Shouldn't, Either: Conceivability Is Not Good Reason for Belief." It started off as a collection of criticisms of various arguments for God's existence, but it has turned into an account of a nontheistic worldview, including basic epistemology, basic metaphysics, a defense of science, an account of morality without belief in God, and a discussion of meaning(fulness) without belief in God. (My background is in philosophy and mathematics.)

I had to do something I didn't want to do, though: I had to begin the book with a section on tolerance and respect. That's not really how I wanted to start it, but it seemed necessary, as I discovered in online discussions that theists can find criticisms of their beliefs disrespectful and can find typical nontheistic analogies trivializing, and I don't want anyone to stop reading because he feels insulted. However, I have wondered whether I should choose a different title for just that reason. So far, I haven't gotten much response when asking that question in online forums. What do you all think?

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